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The World is open, the day is new, and its time to catch some crooks, or become one yourself! Become a sweeper, and clean up crime for money, or be a member of chronos and erase people from the world. Drink the rare tao water and gain special abilities
 
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Name: Naesala R. Kurth
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PostSubject: The Raven King   Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:59 pm

Personal Information

Name: Naesala R. Kurth

Age: 28

Birthplace: A hospital in Chicago

Gender: Male

Appearance: http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/fireemblem/images/thumb/5/55/Ferd-naesala.jpg/600px-Ferd-naesala.jpg
Naesala is tall, skinny and well built. He has long blue hair (believe it or not natural) and weirs elegant black clothing.

Special Characteristics: Nothing out of the ordinary when his powers are turned off, but when he activates his tao powers he creats black wings on his back (read on for details)

Personality: Naesala is a very cunning man, who runs on both compassion and greed. He has a strict code of chivalry as he detests those who harm women, and he tends to give out his money freely to those who need it. However he still has a gold finger and is always looking for more money. He is sly, unpredictable and very charismatic as a leader. He is also a wise cracker and openly mocks who he pleases. He also refrains from killing as much as he can, he soes not enjoy it but still will if he must.

Detailed Information

Classification: AA

Felony: Naesala in a simple word is a bank robber who can not be caught, stopped or killed. He is the leader of a gang of robbers called “The Ravens”. He creates simple plans and highly complex ones, all rarely fail, this is do to when high rank sweepers come to stop him. He also has a death count on his shoulders, as he has been forced to kill dirty cops and those who would kill him and his men.

Weapon: He refrains from most weapons as his tao power is all he needs, he doas however have two, average pistols that he hides as a back up weopon

Attachments: Twin pistols, hidden in his sleeves

Skills

Ability: Raven Claw

Description: A tao power that allows him to creat black raven wings. This grants him flight, high speeds, and able to create strong gusts by flapping them very fast. When he activates his power at full strength he fully becomes a very large raven. This augments his powers greatly but at the price of low time in the form and weakness of body afterwards.

Class: Level 2


History and Role-Play Sample

History: Naesala R. Kurth was born in the United States, in the city of Chicago. He was raised by a normal if not exciting family, there was always something going on and his father was a very funny man. When he went to school he instantly got the popular treatment and a group of friends, this helped him with his people skills and over the years of popularity, he mastered both his humor and his speech. Naesala was also very athletic; this helped him make his choice to join the army as a special ops agent. During his training he received intense training in both marksmanship and hand to hand combat, however he was top of his class when it came to hand to hand, he seemed to have a talent for it. When things seemed up for him he joined a squad and was deployed soon afterward. In a horrific turn of events, they were dropped in the wrong landing zone, and were quickly wiped out, all accept for him. For three years a terrorist group held him and tortured him, and he quickly lost hope. On the brink of suicide he heard strange noises coming from outside and when they ended a man with a rap around his face walked in. He told him of a new chance, and to start his life over again. All he had to do was drink this liquid he gave him. Naesala quickly drank it, quickly falling into a coma. When he awoke he had black wings on his back, this frightened him but the man walked in saying, “This is your new life, your new gift…use it to serve us.” Then he left. For the next 2 years he trained his body and learned to hide his wings and emerge them with his new power, and he became his old self again. All seemed good when this group known as the Apostles of the Stars brought in a prisoner, a beautiful girl named Leanne. Naesala fell in love with her through there conversations from her cell, he could not find out why she was there, but she told him of what they truly wanted, and when they were to kill her Naesala quickly made up his mind, to leave with her was the only way. In a daring attempt Naesala escaped from there grasp and into the free world with his darling and future wife. Now 28 he has resorted to crime with his new power, causing BOTH the Sweepers and The Apostles to chase him.

RP-Sample: Naesala and his men stormed the bank with no hesitation; quickly imobalizing people with threats, the other men had the guns. They all wore there masks, except Naesala, as he was known already. “Clear the cash out, then do the usual and get it out when the helicopters arrive” he sat in a chair as the men did what they normally did. When supenly two men got up with guns and shouted “Freez!” “Sorry your bounty is ours!” Sweepers….those damn pests Naesala thought. “Sorry boys, but I thought the children are supposed to be in time out.” This got them mad and they rushed him, the other men were about to shoot them dead when Naesala stuck up his hand, signaling a stop. With a mighty gust he activated his powers and his wings shot out of his back in a burst of light, and with one mighty wind they were knocked down. “Tie these things up, they seem to want to stay up past there bed time.”


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PostSubject: Re: The Raven King   Tue Jun 02, 2009 6:16 am

1.) Hmm... You do realize by drinking the Tao water, you basically gave your allegiance to the Apostles. It was difficult understanding this... But, did you abandon the Apostles, or were you never with them? The only way you can be a criminal WITH Apostle Powers and be able to use them successfully, is if you actually trained as an Apostles, under the Apostles.

2.) Powers are classified into 3 'levels'. But, if you only want 1 power, it can go to its final form (level 3) if you plan to add more powers overtime, all those powers can go up to level 2 but never level 3. So, for your Class of the power, instead of 83, unless given permission to start stronger, you need to make that level 1, and it needs to be at its basic form. Once more, if you were given special permission from an admin not to do so, you may start at whatever level you please, or whatever level he/she enables you to start as.

So, please edit.
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PostSubject: Re: The Raven King   Tue Jun 02, 2009 1:13 pm

yes, church the site creator is a very good freind of mine so I will edit and cleare up some things. However he was trained for 3 years with them maneged to escape after saving his loved one from death, meaning he is both an enemy of the sweepers AND the Apostles, not a good postion to be in. Bascially he is a man both runing from his past and the law.
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PostSubject: Re: The Raven King   Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:10 pm

To your running...

He is also running from Chronos, if he was a former-Apostle, unless they currently don't have the intelligence... Neutral

Just becareful of your actions as a criminal, each faction has a hitlist, and if the leader of that faction adds you to the hitlist, all of its members will be aiming to kill (you).

And since Church has given you permission, I still need to know what level your power is on? There aren't numbers 1-100 classification for Apostles, it is Level 1, Level 2 or Level 3. Please take note that if you plan on getting on Spell to Level 3, only one may become its final form. If you plan on having more then just that one spell, you can have more, but, none of them can ever reach level 3, their final form... So, tell us, instead of a number 1-100, what power level this spell is currently at? Neutral
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PostSubject: Re: The Raven King   Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:14 pm

level 2, first wings than full raven transformation. And I think...you may be angelus am I right? Oh and my character is in an open fight with the apostles and sweepers, he tries to remain neutral with chronos, as they are too much for him (I will explain in some posts to the chrono numbers to make a deal.)
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PostSubject: Re: The Raven King   Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:17 pm

Alright, your character certainly will add alot of drama to the forum. Which is positive.

Also, please change 83 to Level 2, and describe what you can do at Level 2 with your powers, or just leave the description you have already the way it is.

Once that is done, i'll approve this application.
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PostSubject: Re: The Raven King   Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:18 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Raven King   Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:26 pm

Hmm... Alright, it looks good now.

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